|Head of a Woman, Pablo Picasso|
|Landscape at Mougins, Pablo Picasso|
In the revision, I added some rather geometric mountains and a river, and attempted to add a foreground. I was a little happier with this and uploaded it for Pamela's critique.
She agreed that the second version is a more semi-abstract landscape, but noted that I was still clinging to realism. Her suggestion, illustrated by her Photo Shop magic, is to make the scene more of a birds-eye view with map imagery.